Thursday, 5 July 2018

the hot spring

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  1. Rebekah27 July 2018 at 09:25

    Kia ora, I am Rebekah from Makauri School.
    I liked how you told us about your day at the hot pools.
    I learnt that there are warm pools and hot pools.
    Maybe you could check your spelling and punctuation before you publish it next time.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog here

    Mā te wā
    Rebekah

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    1. Anonymous9 August 2018 at 13:38

      thanks rebekah for your comment :) but do you love titanic and poseidon if you don't know them you could look it up from justis fraser thanks so much your my first person that comment me :)

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